Insomnia -- PG-13 Challenge #127

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Re: Insomnia -- PG-13 Challenge #127

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Luxe, this was wonderful. You have describe so well Mick's contemplation over these sleepless years that eventually brings him to recognize the humanity he so much desires. Very, very beautiful!
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Re: Insomnia -- PG-13 Challenge #127

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Luxe

I wish it was possible to teach someone to write as you do. Weave the emotional content of that wonderful show so skillfully and give us glimpses of the mental journey Mick went through in the aftermath of his rescue of a four year old child and reclaimed his soul.

Delighted to see this pop back to the top of Active Topics. Saved the trouble of hunting it up.

I think I need to hang out in your office for a while...

Thank you!

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Re: Insomnia -- PG-13 Challenge #127

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thanks so much, Moonlighter! :flowers:

and jen :smooch: your comments are always such a pleasure.
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Re: Insomnia -- PG-13 Challenge #127

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I just had to give this gem a bump. Beth cost Mick a lot of sleep over the years but it's all worth it to him
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Re: Insomnia -- PG-13 Challenge #127

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Beautifully done, Luxe. :notworthy: I really like how you included so many different Moonlight themes in this story (insomnia, love, humanity, pain, etc.).

The last line is perfect. :rose:

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Re: Insomnia -- PG-13 Challenge #127

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Wow. Amazing and powerful. Describes perfectly the complex bond Mick feels with Beth.
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